maemo.org Bugzilla – Bug 3570
Development > SDK Releases typo and grammar error corrections
Last modified: 2008-08-23 08:30:39 UTC
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Because I'd rather not spam an individual bugs for each small typo, I'm going to do one bug per section (Development > SDK Releases, Development > Sources, etc) and list the URLs, then the typos on that URL. From top to bottom on the navigation menu and top to bottom on the page (i.e., URL, list of typos). Corrections will be numbered from top to bottom on the page and appear as: Incorrect text -> Corrected text If another submission method or is preferred, please let me know and I will change the procedure for the next section. First, general branding stuff. We need to make sure Maemo is capitalized everywhere and that maemo.org (if it appears) is not. Lowercase maemo appears a lot, so I will not be listing each individual occurrence. Second, "Nokia 770", "Nokia N800", "Nokia N810 Internet Tablet device", etc are very redundant in most places and should to changed to read just "N800" or "770" for most instances. http://maemo.org/development/ 1. Good place -> A good place 2. which has tested set of -> which has a tested set of 3. Probably the best place -> Garage is probably the best place http://maemo.org/development/sdks/ 1. Nokia 770 developers -> OS2006 for 770 developers The headings for all of the SDK sections need to be unified. Some are h4, some h2, there doesn't seem to be any consistency. Doesn't really matter what they end up being, but they need to be consistent. http://maemo.org/development/sdks/maemo-4-1-diablo-sdk/ 1. Maemo SDK 4.1 release -> The Maemo SDK 4.1 release 2. It replaces maemo SDK 4.0.1 -> It replaces the Maemo SDK 4.0.1 3. Chinook(OS2008) -> Chinook (2008). 4. Most of the chinook applications -> Most Chinook applications 5. There are however a few changes -> There are, however, a few changes 6. scratchbox-toolchain-host-gcc also by default. -> scratchbox-toolchain-host-gcc by default. 7. Chinook SDK can be easily -> The Chinook SDK can be easily 8. for Diablo is now available -> for Diablo is now available. 9. 99% of the sources compile -> 99% of the sources compile. 10. between maemo4.1 and maemo4.0.1 -> between Maemo 4.1 and Maemo 4.0.1 11. The maemo4.1 SDk can be -> The Maemo 4.1 SDK can be http://maemo.org/development/sdks/maemo_4_0_1_chinook_sdk/ 1. Maemo SDK 4.0.1 release -> The Maemo SDK 4.0.1 release 2. replaces maemo4.0 SDK. -> replaces Maemo 4.0 SDK. 3. Highlights need to be <h4> 4. Content comparison between Maemo 4.0.1 and Maemo 4.0 http://maemo.org/development/sdks/maemo_3-x_bora/ 1. supportssoftware -> supports software 2. NokiaN800 -> Nokia N800 3. IT OS 2007 Edition -> OS2007 4. in maemo 3.2 than in maemo 3.1 -> in Maemo 3.2 as in Maemo 3.1. 5. flasher tool can be used than in maemo 3.1 -> flasher tool can be used as in Maemo 3.1. 6. See the INSTALL.tx file for details -> See the INSTALL.tx file for details. 7. same content than in maemo 3.1. -> same content as in Maemo 3.1. 8. How to make debian DBG packages -> How to make a DBG package. 9. documents have been updated -> documents have been updated. 10. IT OS 2007 Edition -> OS2007 11. This seems wrong: <li>Upgrading from maemo 3.1 to maemo 3.2 can be done with <span class="codefrag">"apt-get dist-upgrade"</span>. Please read the INSTALL.txt file for details. </li> 12. Maemo Debugging Guide -> Maemo Debugging Guide. 13. OS 2007Edition -> OS2007 14. noofficial -> no official 15. OS 2006and -> OS2006 and 16. and OS 2007 -> and OS2007 17. supports OS 2006and -> OS2006 and 18. supports OS 2007 -> supports OS2007 19. isavailable -> is available 20. should be in most cases simple. -> should be simple in most cases. 21. scriptthat -> script that 22. toinstall -> to install 23. 3.0repository -> 3.0 repository 24. maemo-sdk-install_3.1.shthen -> maemo-sdk-install_3.1.sh then 25. outsidethe -> outside the 26. filesfrom -> files from 27. startingthe -> starting the 28. The current version, maemo 3.1 only -> The current version, Maemo 3.1, only 29. causetroubles -> cause trouble 30. scriptwill -> script will 31. filesinside -> files inside 32. ableto -> able to 33. componentsin -> components in 34. bora's -> Bora's 35. theScratchbox -> the Scratchbox 36. usethe -> use the 37. packageduring -> package during 38. isan -> is an http://maemo.org/development/sdks/maemo_2-2-gregale/ 1. IT OS 2006 Edition -> OS2006 2. The red box overlaps the navigation box on WebKit (based on Safari 3.1). 3. The lists on this page are broken, a lot of <ul></ul> pairs need to be removed. 4. OS 2006 -> OS2006 5. the binary only packages -> The binary-only packages 6. packages for the -> Packages for the 7. developer root filesystem -> Developer root filesystem 8. may cause troubles -> may cause trouble 9. OS 2006 -> OS2006 10. OS 2007 -> OS2007 http://maemo.org/development/sdks/older-releases/ 1. For consistency, the OS versions should all be changed to read "OS2005" through "OS2008". User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; U; PPC Mac OS X; en-US) AppleWebKit/523 (KHTML, like Gecko, Safari/523.10) OmniWeb/v621.0.99313 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; U; PPC Mac OS X; en-US) AppleWebKit/523 (KHTML, like Gecko, Safari/523.10) OmniWeb/v621.0.99313
Picking this up since I now have permissions to take care of it myself.
The Bora page was about as atrocious as HTML can get. That person was either drunk or REALLY needs to be fired. . . . Anyway, it's done, please check for missed existing issues or new issues.